Shot list? Script? Those need to be posted as well.
Overall idea was good. It did take me a few times to watch it though to fully understand it however. I think what made it confusing is that we don't see the poster on the wall before this whole thing starts. Opening with a wide shot establishes that he is in his room doing homework. It would also show the poster on the wall next to him. Not seeing this made it confusing. I like the idea of the poster talking to him but the animation didn't match the voices. The poster wasn't all that great either and I think more time could have been spent making that look nicer. I'm also wondering why he'd have a poster of a ESD and smoke on his wall? Maybe if that was in a magazine on his desk, it would have been more appropriate. I'm not sure there are any kids your age with posters of ESDs on their wall. 3.4 points.